She Will Wait !




The seedy bar smelt of stale peanuts and cheap cologne , the atmosphere grew mystic with sweat and hardships of fisherman.
The lady sat there with a glass of red wine, deliriously waiting for someone.

Young ship workers danced to the loud music.

He did not arrive even after 9 years , she will wait.....




21 comments :

  1. Hi Tanya... very happy to see your update... and back with the bang... these lines just delivered a lot of things... wonderfull, keep going..!!! take care...:)

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    1. Oh ! So happy with the gesture of yours, glad you liked it Sasi :) Thankyou !

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  2. But for how long will she wait? Isn't it time to move ahead?

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    1. Maybe forever :D No, in love one can never move on... Maybe that's my take, otherwise people do get over, but not according to me :) Thanks Greeny !

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  3. Hi Tanya,

    Wow, 9 years, huh? Quite a long time. Nice F55. Keep up the good work

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Yeah 9 year, Jay ! Thanks for liking it :) Take care friend :)

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  4. That's too long. Will he ever come, time she moved on...

    very well written!

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    1. Thanks for reading Meenakshi, yeah may be some day, or maybe he died in the war :(

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  5. Good post!.. 9 years seems too long... real true love i believe. Today's gen can't wait for 9 days.... Hats off..

    Cheers!

    Himanshu Nagpal | Being Traveler

    Being Traveler

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    1. Oh yes! You pointed it nicely, these days people are bound to move on even with the slightest distortion in a relationship. :( True love has to last forever otherwise it's not true :)

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  6. Sometimes, It is difficult to move on!
    Good one Tanya!

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    1. Thanks for the apt reply dear Valli, yes it's impossible sometimes :)

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  7. hmmm.....makes one think.......I loved your blog....the ambience is great out here

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    1. Thanks a lot Ritesh, Welcome to my blog. :) Keep visiting, take care !

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  8. the ever lasting love and undying hope of a lover!

    http://khanvibes.blogspot.in/

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    1. :) Welcome here, Defiant Princess :) Yes a tale of undying hope, :)

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    1. Glad you liked it Cynosure :D. Welcome to "Coveted Dreams ":)

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  10. Nine years! Thats too much.. girl should move on.

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  11. That 55 fiction again -_- I don't accept this one!!! I want a full story!

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