When Its True, Nothing Holds Back!!

One of my Favorite Paintings. Courtesy

Her presence was mesmerizing... So far yet it seemed he knew her since eternity!
His body moved in swift proportion with the Jazz!
I think I have just fallen in love with You... He said to the lady

What if I tell you I am blind??? She exclaimed.

Still I Love you, came the reply.



 Author's Note: 
Another try at 55 fiction. Just love the experience of penning down an idea in 55 words. Hope you all will like this story.

Background:
I just wanted to convey that Love doesn't seek physical comfort, here the guy did not let go, even when he came to know that the Girl he fell in love with was blind. I myself believe in "Love at first Sight" Because I have experienced the same! :) N I must say, it was worth the Risk!! Take care folks!

29 comments :

  1. Idea in 55 words wow and you did a fab job. Keep it up Tanya.

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    1. Thanks a lot, I am really happy that I did justice to the idea :) Thanks for coming dear!

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    1. :) Can't stop smiling! Thanks so much Janika! Your thought made my day, take care

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  3. Simply awesome.... !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Ohh glad you liked it dear Ayushi. :) Keep visiting dear ! Take care

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  4. beautiful painting checkout my blog at
    http://www.definingwords.blogspot.com
    feel free to leave a comment

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    1. Ohh thanks Steve, I would have loved if you wrote a comment pertaining to teh story in particular. Your blog is lovely. Take care dear!

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  5. मैंने ऐसे बहोत से प्रसंग सुने हुए है की कोई एक रचना किसी रचनाकार ने रातो तक जा जग कर पूरी की हो, वही रचना श्रोताओ को अच्छी न लगे, ऐसा भी कई बार हुआ की कोई एक रचना किसी ने महज टाइम पास के लिए लिखी हो और श्रोताओ ने उसे आसमान पर उठा लिया है, मेरी पिछली टिपण्णी के लिए माफ़ी मांगता हूँ.
    बेहतरीन रचना प्रकाशित करने के लिए धन्यवाद्, आप बेहद ही उम्दा लेखक है, अच्छा काम करते रहे

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    1. See I am never against suggestions & advice, if You did not like something you could have told me but there'a a limit to everything. What you said was offending that's what I had to covey. I know I am not an excellent writer, maybe nowhere near that but you can help me become one, Right! My readers are an asset, all your opinions are most welcome!! Take care!

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  6. Cute this is!
    Love at first sight! so romantic

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    1. Glad you liked it angel! :) Just a random idea :)

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  7. I believe in love at first sight also, for the same reason as you. Thanks for sharing your blog link. I fell in love at first sight with the layout because of several of the images you have in your header are classic all time favourites I have used myself over the years :)

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    1. The pleasure is mine, I got such a lovely blogger as my reader. Thanks a lot friend! I hope you liked it in here :)

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  8. I will just make a comment with a song link. This song defines love for me. Do listen Tanya!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1_ZpjD6x77E

    Leo loves the colors on your blog! :)

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    1. First of all thanks for the sharing the song, really loved the lyrics :) Next, I would like to tell you that I am honored by the last line! It's all in your eyes if you like the colors the pleasure is all mine friend. Take care dear, thanks for all the lovely comments. Keep visiting!

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  9. I can't believe you wrote that story in 55 words...yet it gives so much feeling. Love at first sight is a beautiful thing isn't it. I fell in love with my husband when I saw him across a bar....we met...didn't see each other again for 7 years...then 6 years later we married! Don't mess with love at first sight....lol

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    1. Glad you liked the story dear. Thanks for sharing your love at first sight momnet with me & my blog. I feel elated at the very thought of imagining what all you went through buddy. :)

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  10. Love is blind and marriage is eye opener....having said that, when there is love in your eyes and hearts oppen for each other, nothing more counts...nothing else counts :)

    Bravo Post!! Tanya.

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    1. The statement twisted from my perspective "Love is Blind, Marriage a lifelong commitment, commitment to give support to the person who blindly fell in love with you" :) Welcome to "Coveted Dreams", Thanks a lot for visiting the blog. Keep coming!

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    2. Yeah thanks for the lovely comment dear ! :) Take care Numerounity.

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  11. I loved this one.. :) .. Great going!

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    1. Thank you so much Megha! I am happy that you liked the story :)

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  12. 55 words eh? :) I think the poem itself was craving for you to write more! It was unfair to leave the poem itself unsatisfied of its existence :) .. But I loved the use of Jazz and the charm of "if I were blind" :) ...

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    1. hehe thanks for the message Samik! Thanks for liking it, hope I did justice to the 55 words. :D

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  13. You did a commendable job in both the posts for 55 fiction. 55 fiction is always tricky. Nevertheless, how about 101 fiction? Like the idea? Try it and participate in the competition.

    http://www.thecolorsofmysoul.com/writer/471600/elena-toporikova/

    P.S. I have nothing to do with this competition. I'm trying to write too but haven't come across the idea till now. Why don't you try? :) :)

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    1. That's a lovely comment from an excellent story teller out there. Thanks! Prasoon :D I checked out the site it seemed to be nice, I will try sending my entry but the rules are stringent I don't think I write so well :) STill thanks a lot for making me introduce to the contest I will like to be a part!

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