It Follows Me..

Courtesy
It follows me where ever I go
Don't know whether like a friend or a foe
When Sun shines bright
it reaches a zenith
In the dark when I need a company 

it vanishes with all its subtlety !
Don't know why it stalks me in all grown light

and make me filth in the moon lit night...
I wonder when !!
It will leave my destiny
To make me feel like a holy being 
not carved with a shadow at all
I would just exist in the shallows

23 comments :

  1. You are growing with each poem ... awesome ... this makes me think :-)

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    1. Oh thank you soo much Amrit for such an appreciative comment. Yeah I am learning profusely from fellow bloggers. Just trying my best. Glad you liked it !

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  2. superb!! Tany.... well weaving of sentences... :)

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    1. I hope you like the poem :) Thanks for the lovely message :) :) \|/.•´¯)░)
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  4. nice poetry frnd.. :)
    the pic is very apt to your writing.. :)

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    1. Happy that you read the poem friend. Thanks for liking it! Take care !

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  5. Loved it Tanya...Last 5 lines are awesome :)

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    1. Thanks a lot! Yeah I wanted to convey how the person wants to get rid of his shadow & still would be knowing how hollow his life would be!

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  6. Wow ! You write with such clarity ! Fabulous, sorry after a while I am back to blogging, have closed my previous one & will start afresh dear :) How are you Tani partner ??

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    1. Hii, dear Mishti Welcome back my dear. Glad you liked the post :D Take care dear !

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  7. Nice poetry !!

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    1. Thank you Ayushi, I just visited the website & I must say it's just awesome, your writings speak a lot about your dreams & desires. Thanks, take care !

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  8. so much emotions playing inside your mind, tanya! the shadow sounds haunting. this was beautifully expressed! :-)

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    1. :D Thank you Irene. I am delighted that you think I expressed it beautifully, :) :)

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  9. Shadows are interesting and mysterious...Beautiful poem Tanya!...

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    1. :D Thanks for liking Valli. It's a great honor that you liked the poem dear!

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  10. Maybe shadows are best left as they are :) Mysterious.. but then again, they are part of us, so maybe we are just as mysterious. We don't need to be holy to be mysterious after all. Good poem.

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    1. Very true, I just wanted to explore the mystery with the poem. Thanks for reading it Leo, glad you liked it :D

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  11. I havent read much of your......but as far as i have i liked this one very much.....
    I am more of a imaginary and nature theme loving person....so i like this one very much....

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    1. Welcome to my blog ! Thankyou so much :)

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