Introspection...


Is it the sunshine or the twinkle in my eye ?
Is it the sweet wind or the blessing I received ?
Is the moon enough to swallow my profound grief ?
Or Should I call the sea to gift me a flourishing delight ?
Am I complete with the world ?
Or is it just your love that surmounts my beauty ?
Can I forgot those memories of cheerful night ?
Or are there no memories to release my obsolete journey ?
Did you ever belonged to my soul ?
Or was it just a dream that turned into a nightmare surrounding me with distress & gloom ! 



P.S: A poem concerned with epiphany & introspection. It's just a fictional composition 



34 comments :

  1. I loved it ... so much thoughts and emotions embedded in your lines ... very well written !!!

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    1. I am really happy to get such a nice comment from a master poet as you Amrit ! Thanks for liking the composition!

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  2. Nicely wrought … and PS makes it clearer…

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    1. Hii Deeps. Thanks for dropping by & reading the composition :D

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    1. Glad you liked it Tonnomura :D Thanks a lot !!

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    2. I nominated you for another award, details on my blog :) I don't know if it would be something you would like to do but it says to give the award to my favorite bloggers so yeah :D

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    3. Ohh my dear Tonnomura you made me delighted yet again with such a lovely gesture of yours. I can't tell you how happy I am to have such a sweet reader. Your comments make me sing & such awards make me dance :D Thanks, once again my dear, Will do the post in a while, suffering from Viral my dear !

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  4. You use very beautiful word in all phrase, every single word Has increased the importance with the way you use it,
    "epiphany & introspection" that is the best part of this composition that touch me Thank for your valuable work with beautiful word
    From India

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    1. Oh I am happy that you liked the word selection this time :D The pleasure is mine when I get such a nice compliment from one of the most regular readers at Coveted Dreams. Thanks, take care!

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  5. In search of uprising questions in the delusional way...
    Beautifully expressed :)

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    1. Thank you Simran, glad you liked it. Yeah a lot of emotions going on there :D

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  6. I am stopping by after visiting 2 Bags Full 'Grow your Blog' event. And I am glad I did, that poem was absolutey lovely. It made my day! I am now following you, Annie

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    1. Hello Dear Annie. Welcome to "Coveted Dreams", I am glad you liked the poem dear. It's a great compliment when some one says that my writings inspire them. Actually it makes my day lovelier :D Thanks a lot for dropping by ! Keep visiting. Take care!

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  7. M here from Aaekay's blog!

    Truly loved this composition of yours..specially the last lines as I can relate to it very much :)

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    1. Welcome to "Coveted Dreams" Me. I am ecstatic to have you here. Thanks for liking the composition :) Have a nice day !

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    1. Thank you dear :D Glad you liked the expression I wanted to convey !

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  9. You always surprise me with your writing skills, each line is just too beautiful . Btw did u check my award post?

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    1. Thanks a lot dear Khushbu. Yes, dear I had just left a comment there :) Your post was fabulous. All the best, thank you once again !

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  10. Arre main thode din kya gai, you have evolved so much my dearest blogger.. yeh kya hai?? Such a wonderful write-up my tani darling :) I am in love with this epic poetry. You expressed such a wonderful poignant message dear :) Super-like, super-fantastic :D

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    1. Lol ! Ohh my dear Mishti I am so happy to see you again after such a long gap. How are you? You changed your email too, haan :( Thanks for the comment & welcome back my dear ! take care!

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    1. Welcome to "Coveted Dreams", thanks for liking it. happy Blogging ! Keep visiting :D

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  12. Tanya :) .. I so loved it.. beautiful composition.. Keep writing... Way to go :)

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    1. Hii Megha, thanks for liking it friend! Take care !

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  13. Questioning your place in the universe? even if fictionally :) ... loved it! nicely put...
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    I joined your site earlier so that I could keep myself updated with your posts every once in a while :) .. I like poetry and especially the way you breathe your life into it.. :)... carry on and you will find my comments every once in a while if not TOO often :)...

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    1. Ohh yeah, first of all you understand what was going on in my mind when I wrote this. Cheers! Next, thanks for following it, I would love you get such thoughtful comments more & more, so whenever possible leave a message, I would like to hear what you think, an honest comment is always welcome friend.:)

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  14. Oh nice poem. There was a lot of soul to it. I esp. loved 'Is the moon enough to swallow my profound grief ?'

    Btw, first time here. You have a nice blog. Following it...

    http://thediaryofaliar.blogspot.com/

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    1. Welcome to CD :D. Thanks for liking the poem. :) Glad that you found a soul attached to the essence, take care! Heading to your blog :)

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  15. anguish excellently painted in words my dear tanya. :-) it's fictional yet it seems like it comes from somewhere deep :-)

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    1. Hello Dear Irene, thanks for the lovely words, just a random thought :D hehe, I hope you liked it! Take care !

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  16. Deep emotional questions! Beautiful poem and a very apt picture! Loved the way you designed your blog!! Pretty!

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    1. Hii Valli! Glad you liked the poem dear. :) You have one of the prettiest blog I have come across, thanks for the complement dear! :)

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