Rocking Life

It Rocks & climbs heather & tither....
It will get over one day.....
Live it King Size & behave like a King :)
In it's quest to suffice...
Life is an un-turned stone every moment...
With everyday growing emotions...

I try & understand it though...
not letting my tears overflow...
It's happy now the next moment could be rocking...
Correcting my manner of walking....

It takes me through leaps & bounds...
making me at times frown...
But I know when m Happy...
It does not get all that crappy....

Just with some hope I know...
I can learn how to sow...
Sow the seeds for a better tomorrow...
Getting over every one's sorrow....

P.S: This poem was just a random composition. Comments for improvement would always be welcome... IF you like it I m really thankful...
Keep Smiling 

Submitted for Poetry Pantry #115.
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20 comments :

  1. I enjoyed your reflections here. Yes, life definitely is an unturned stone every moment. We don't know what we will find along our path. I like your philosophy of sowing seeds for a better tomorrow!

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    1. Ohh! Thankyou so much. I love poems related to life hence this the lyrics are also reflected in that essence :) It's an honor that you liked it. :)

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  2. Enjoyed reading this poem. Long poems aren't my 'cup of tea', but I love reading them. I am a haiku poet.

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    1. Thanks so much Kristjaan for liking the poem & dropping your lovely comments. I also write random compositions according to the feel of what my heart says. :)

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  3. Yes, Life is an unturned stone every moment, but I don't think it would be as fun if it weren't.

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    1. Ohh yes it's true. There would be no fun & no enthusiasm to see what's gonna be next. It essence of Life is to unravel the mystery :) Thanks for the comment

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  4. Life is an unturned stone...so true. Really like your hopeful perspective in this write.

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    1. Ohh thanks for liking the poem ~ Yeah i always try n search for a hopeful approach :)

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  5. You did a good job with the rhyme scheme, and conveyed a positive attitude.

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    1. Glad you liked it Kim. Yeah I actually love to get poem rhyme earnestly. :)

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  6. Life is an un-turned stone every moment... love that line... it's true and it's important to not forget this... thank you for reminding us. I thought this was well written and I too liked the rhyming... whenever I try to rhyme it seems to come out cheesy, but yours is well done.

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    1. Such appreciative words. Thanks so much Serena. No, I think your poems are so lovely. Keep visiting I would be waiting for your comments.

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  7. Immense piece of rhyme.. its the actual portrait of life.. or the most of it, i'd say..

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    1. Yeah tried depicting life from somewhat rocking aspect ;) Thanks for this lovely comment. Hope you really liked it :)

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  8. Life is an unturned stone--true and I like all the things this implies---Thank you!!

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    1. I should thank you for such lovely words. :) Yeah it's a mystery we all would want to unravel :)

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  9. Poetry is the essence of silence within ..that erupts overflows with emotions goes on a spin.. adding flesh bones skin..

    nice meeting you on indiblogger .. keep up the good work.. poetry holistically heals ...a cosmic wheel.. within a wheel

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    1. Thanks for such a lovely reply, Those lines you said really reveal a lot about poetry & life. :) I am glad too at meeting you & getting to read your poetry as well. Thanks a lot for dropping by

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  10. Hi....
    When i read the title, i thought that you might be talking about the other kind of "Rock" That i always think about.
    But this poem changed my view and it is very good. It really didn't seem like a random composition at all asa claimed by you.

    Keep up the good work.

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    1. Ohh so nice of you dear Janika. Which other rock were you talking about? Glad you liked the composition :)

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